45 Sleepy Lake

Feel free to tell me about any flaws in the storyline, grammar or art! I'll try to fix it in the final version of the 1st chapter!


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   "Now that all of you are content, I expect you'll want to keep it that way? If so, I recommend you give us a nice photo album of your worlds. Desmond will be giving a helping hand with all this, and will gladly help you out of your world if you take more that 5 minutes. And he CAN do that, since he's one of you."
  "Alina, after Desmond gave her the doll, changed her uncooperative attitude to a warm and pleasant one. This was the first time I've seen her like this, and it filled me with relief. Out of all the time I've been here, I've never seen anyone radiate such warmth and content."