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9 - And my savior gave me his hand by Zengel 9 - And my savior gave me his hand by Zengel
Hey, is that title correct? Please tell me if i make mistakes :<

P.S. I wish I could draw faster > <

edit: yyaaaayy I'm so happy I've got so nice comments there :3 Thanks everyone! and sorry for non-replying
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RainbowDash420 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
my fav part
iheartdragonwolf Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
you should really make a show or comic out of this it would be very popular!!:D
Zengel Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, I'm so random, I don't really have a plot, just ideas for drawing practice. But thanks!
InnerBushman Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
I'm sure lot's of people would love to write some stories/plots for such great artist. I know I would!
Zengel Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
Heh heh, I've found one already, but he's russian and now we need a good translator :D
InnerBushman Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
From Russian to English? I'm sure you could do the translation yourself. All you need is someone who can proofread it and correct some mistakes. I can help if you like?
Zengel Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, yes, but the text must also be literary written :3
I can make a bad translation and then give it to a writer who can correct a lot of mistakes and also improve the style x3 Are you a writer?
blossoming-flowers Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I am a writer, if you still need help! I just won't do mature stuff.. ;v; 
Zengel Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for offering, I'll keep it in mind!
InnerBushman Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
I never tried to write anything of my own but I have helped some of my friends to improve some of their texts translated to English. I also don't think you should focus on "writing style" so much... You are missing a point here.

The point is: your drawing style is what's awesome. The plot and writing style are just accessories to your drawings.

You just should give it a try. Ask your friend to write a sample plot with dialogues and narration for maybe 2-4 pages. Something like a pilot script. Then translate it to English trying to convey the idea, not the style. And at last give it to some people like me, willing to proofread it. They can help you fix language problems. If they will like it, you guys can start a whole new, longer story. Then see if the people you were working with, are interested to work with you on a bigger project.

PS: ugh... >_<' Wall of text. More of a monologue than a comment. I hope I didn't bore you to death. :XD:
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